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kemmyb in Freewriters • last year

What a touching story! You had me on the edge of my seat as you gently built the suspense of whether Elizabeth would make it home with Veronica and Rolando. I admire the couple's unwavering love and dedication to their daughter. I never expected the loss of Elizabeth. The way you tie this part with the loss of Rolando's mother tug at my heartstrings!

Stories like this deserve a happy ending. I'm pleased Rolando found the strength to write songs again and their plan to seek alternative parenthood. Not everyone can recover from these losses. Beautifully written! Take care and have a relaxing Sunday. 🥰 !PIMP

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justclickindiva last year

Hello @kemmyb. I'm pleased you liked my story and the outcome. A family divided will, most likely, never recover from a devastation as the loss of a child. But to have two losses in a short period can surely plummet one into a deep despair.

There is never a one cure-for-all in finding strength within yourself to move forward in any difficult situation. And some never recover. I was pleased with the wife's understanding and patience throughout the ordeal. Surely, she was devastated herself; however, her husband was dealt two blows. It takes a strong foundation of love and support in a relationship to overcome obstacles.

There situation may not end in their desires or a family. But at least they were looking ahead now.

Thanks so much for your visit and lovely compliment. I appreciate it and your support.

Take care.

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