What a touching story! You had me on the edge of my seat as you gently built the suspense of whether Elizabeth would make it home with Veronica and Rolando. I admire the couple's unwavering love and dedication to their daughter. I never expected the loss of Elizabeth. The way you tie this part with the loss of Rolando's mother tug at my heartstrings!
Stories like this deserve a happy ending. I'm pleased Rolando found the strength to write songs again and their plan to seek alternative parenthood. Not everyone can recover from these losses. Beautifully written! Take care and have a relaxing Sunday. 🥰 !PIMP