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RE: Out of Reach (weekend freewrite)

in #weekendfreewrite6 years ago

I was expecting that something happened to his brother as it was all in past tense but I didn't expect that it would be him who did it. It's a very interesting story, a little bit difficult to read but at the end it all made sense. And to be honest I really don't want to know what that child did :)

And I'm shaking even when I'm thinking that there might be people around me who made did something like this and simply behave normally. You never know..

Thank you for sharing! It's been my pleasure to read! And congratulations on your curie vote!

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To be honest, I didn't know either, that's just how the story came out :) IT started out completely different in my head...
True, we think we know someone, but we don't. It's so easy to lie, to pretend to be something you're not...

Thank you :) I'm glad you liked it!