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RE: A GRAVEYARD STORY

in The Ink Welllast year

You have your reader totally invested in the outcome.

You drawn the reader in using the classic mechanisms of illuminating dialogue and scene setting, then you carry the story by layering information, strategically, until the reader is hanging on every word to get to the finish. Really nice job!

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Thank you for the positive feedback